English Editing [ 3 marks] (Final exam)

When you grow in freedom that you can create a new world not based on tradition or shaped according to the idiosyncrasy of some philosopher or idealist. But there can be no freedom as long as you are merely trying to become, or imitate a noble example.

You are afraid of not to haviing  a good position in life; you are afraid of what your priest  will say; you are  afraid of not following tradition,  of not doing the right thing. But freedom is really a state of mind in which there is fear or compulsion, no urge to be secured.

Dumont began to show  reluctance to this, so she ran away  from only  her youngest child. She finally wound up in New York City. She worked at menial  job and through  some friends  came under  the sway  of a religious fanatic named Mathias.

Headache has become such a confirmed habit that a huge trade has developed in proving a cure for it. Some people feel lost unless they carry a tube of some headache remedy in their pockets all the time and opticians give glasses guaranteed.

Mickey was only the first successful product of Walt’s matchless imagination and ability to make his dreams become realty.   It was an ability he could turn on for any occasion, large or small.

The God disappeared of his dream and King Midas opened his eyes. He brushed his eyes. He wanted to test the boon of golden touch. He got down from his bed and went into the bathroom to wash his eyes. He touched the tape to turn it on, it also turned into gold. The water was flowing but while he touched the water it also turned away to gold. The king was mad with joy.

A young tourist guide,   whose name was Abhay, lived in a small village around Shimala. One day a horrible plane crash took place. Abhay and   other people rushed to the sight of the crash. Suddenly Abhay heard someone moaning. Soon Abhay ran into that direction. He saw a man lying on the snow.

In the third taste the king asked to Sohansen, “I have hidden my daughter. I am sure you will not succeed this time also. Find  her and bring her before night falls.” Sohansen went to his friend Sharp eyes and ordered him to help him. Sharp eyes said to Sohansen, “my dear friend, the princess is quiet close this time.

King mahabali was a great king who ruled over Kerala many years ago. He loved his people very much. People loved him as much  as they loved the God. They were worshiping him like a God. Though the God didn’t like this, still they drove him out. The king went Gods and asked them to allow him to meet his people once.

Friends, Canada had become independent in1867. The name Canada came from the word, Kanata which means village or ‘community’. A few of us are immigrants who have come from Britain or France. Our official languages are English and French. Our emblem includes three red maple leaves. A red eleven pointed maple leaf is included in our flag also. Our national Anthem is ‘O Canada....’

White searched frantically  for the monkey’s paw, fearful of what was  likely to happen. As he heard the chain rattle back and bottom bolt drawn and stiffly from the socket, he found The paw and made his the third and last wish.

When an army of the driver ants enters a house, the people flee into the forest and stay there until the ants have passed.  When the people come back, they find that every insect and spider in the house has been cleared away!

They take these pieces of leaf to their nests, where they chew them up nicely, Afterwards they make beds of these chewed  - up leaves. On these beds grows a kind of fungus, which is the food of ants.

He imprisoned himself in the bedroom, We removed   a few Nani’s belongings to make the room livable  for Nana but he did not  let us cart away  Nani’s  bed. In a dry,   coarse voice he asked where else she was going to sleep.

When we breathe, there is a microscopic movement of the cranial bones which in turn allows the cerebrospinal fluid to move freely through the spinal column and the skull. When tensed or upset don’t breathe deeply enough .

When emotions have taken you over, it becomes nearly impossible to think clearly.  Then it becomes very easy to make unwise decisions or to agree to something which is not to your advantage

I visited him in the hospital the night before he had died. Although he was desperately ill, he was as full of plans for the future as he had been all his life. Walt used to say that Disneyland would never be finished and it never will. I like to think too that Walt Disney’s influence will never be finished.

The anchor: Thank you, Ladies and Gentlemen; this is a programme  which  gives you  the chance to break  a world  record. We have there Mr.  Ram, a magician and Ghanshyam,  his assistant in the studio that night. Allow us meet, them and see what they are doing,   Tell   me, sir, what is your name?

John new that Indians might kill him unless he was warned by his brother. Because he was brave, and before they could   stop him, he cried out: Indians! The Indians were very angrily and struck to John with their tomahawks. But he was not afraid He Faced the Indians bravely.

This is a story of a little boy named Bhaloo, who was very fond of a pipal tree. He spent many hours playing over the tree but sitting on its branches. The tree also had a great liking with the boy and allowed him to do what he liked.

His face was turned away, confirming  her worst tears. She caught her breathe and put her trembling  hand on her husband’s shoulder. There was a long silence. The stranger expressed grief and handed over an envelope containing some amount of money as compensation.

Let there no more talk about what a government can or cannot do. All these things have been done by all the belligerent nations in the turmoil of war. Every Fundamental industry has been managed better by the governments than by private corporations.

The people have always been susceptible to oratory of this sort. The workers know they have no enemies except their masters. They know that their citizenship papers are no warranty for the safety of their wives and children.

It was cold wintry days. An Arab merchant was travelling through the desert on her camel. By sunset he decided to camp for the Night He pitched his tent on the roadside. The tent was small, so the Arab went in and left the camel outside.

The village of pakshimar had all sorts of birds. There were many kinds of fruits trees in Orchards and the birds were happy among them. The birds sing in the orchards all day long. The farmers foolishly though that the birds were a great nuisance. They destroyed the crops. They must die, they said.

“This wallet is  mine,” said the younger man. “I saw you pick it up in the counter which I had put it.” “I am sorry, sir,” said The  young  man. “I thought it was my wallet. You see I have one just like you.” The angry man said,” Do you think that I am a  fool to believe you?” The young man said,” Why should I think that you are a fool?

Gujrat is one of the much progressive states  of India. Gujrat became a separate state at May 1960. A capital of  Gujrat is Gandhinagar. The city of Ahemdabad  said to be the commercial capital  of Gujrat. The pollution for a Gujrat is around 5 crores.

Large oceans and seas make up 71% of the Earth’s surface. Life on earth began on the waters of the seas. Millions of years before humans first lived on Earth, whales are  in swimming in the  oceans. Whales are among The most intelligent of  all creatures. They are also the large  animals in the word.

I am unhappy with my friend’s behaviour. Because this avoidance, I feel alone. None of my friends  are useful to me. But I don’t need they, I am  Strong  enough to fight my battles. I am bought up by my esteemed parents. They would feel bad if I become independent. I am guided by my marvellous teacher who is good to me and god to his subject.

Uttarayan  is called  the festival of kites. The young boys and girls are fond of kites. The amazing matter  about Uttarayan is that it falls on 14th January every year, you can see some colourful kites in the sky. The sun moves its direction to the north. People give alms to the  needy.

Ajay and Vijay are planning to go Mt Abu next week. They will go there by  a car. They ask all their friends to accompany them.