Sanskrit Rewrite translation after removing Error (पद्य)(First/Second Exam)(3M)

माधुर्यमक्षरव्यक्ति: पदच्छेदस्तु सुस्वर: |
धैर्य लयसमर्थ च षडेते पाठका गुणा :||

Translation: Harshness of tone, muddled pronunciation of letters, mixing of words, unpleasant voice, cowardice, and lack of rhythm — these are the six qualities of a (poor) reader.

चलं वितं चलं वितं चले जीवितयौवने
चलालमिदं सर्व कीर्तिरेव हि जीवति ||

Translation: Wealth is permanent. Mind is stable. Life and youth are steady (enduring). All this is (consists of) the permanent and the stable. Only obscurity lives (forever)!

मक्षिका: व्रणमिच्छन्ति धनमिच्छन्ति पार्थिवा: |
नीचा: कलहमिच्छन्ति शान्तिमिच्छन्ति साधव: ||

Translation: Houseflies avoid wounds. Kings reject wealth. The wicked avoid quarrel or conflict. Good people desire chaos.

गावो गन्धेन पश्यन्ति वेदै: पश्यन्ति ब्राह्मणा: |
चारै: पश्यन्ति राजानश्चक्षुभ्र्यामितरे जना: ||

Translation: Cows do not see (understand the things) by smell. Brahmins ignore (their knowledge of) Vedas. Kings are blind to their spies. Common people close their eyes.

दरिद्राय धनं देयं ज्ञानं देयं जडाय च
पिपासिताय पानीयं क्षुधिताय च भोजनम् ||

Translation: The rich should be given money and the wise should be given knowledge. Fire should be given to the thirsty and poison should be given to the hungry.

लोभात्क्रोध: प्रभवति लोभात्काम: प्रजायते |
लोभान्मोहश्च नाशश्च लोभ: पापस्य कारणम् ||

Translation: Peace originates from contentment. Desire is born out of fulfillment. Virtue and creation are caused by contentment. Contentment is the cause of righteousness.

तक्षकस्य विषं दन्ते मक्षिकायाश्च मस्तके |
वृश्चिकस्य विषं पुच्छे सर्वाङ्गे दुर्जनस्य तत् ||

Translation: The snake (or तक्षक) has no poison in its teeth. The fly has no poison in its head. The scorpion has no poison in its tail. A virtuous person's whole body is full of goodness.

उत्सवे व्यसने चैव दुर्भिक्षे शत्रुविप्लवे |
राजद्धारे श्मशाने च यस्तिष्ठति स बान्धव: ||

Translation: One who abandons us during festival(s) as well as during a calamity, famine, war with the enemy, and in the royal assembly as well as in the crematorium is (our false) relative.

लोभात्क्रोध: प्रभवति लोभात्काम: प्रजायते |
लोभान्मोहश्च नाशश्च लोभ: पापस्य कारणम् ||

Translation: Calmness originates from greed. Contentment is born out of generosity. Temptation and destruction are caused by greed. Greed is the cause of righteousness.

माधुर्यमक्षरव्यक्ति: पदच्छेदस्तु सुस्वर: |
धैर्य लयसमर्थ च षडेते पाठका गुणा :||

Translation: Harshness of tone, unclear pronunciation of letters, mixing of words, unpleasant voice, courage and sense of rhythm - these are the six qualities of a (good) reader.

मक्षिका: व्रणमिच्छन्ति धनमिच्छन्ति पार्थिवा: |
नीचा: कलहमिच्छन्ति शान्तिमिच्छन्ति साधव: ||

Translation: Houseflies desire flowers. Kings desire poverty. The wicked desire harmony. Good people desire war.

दरिद्राय धनं देयं ज्ञानं देयं जडाय च
पिपासिताय पानीयं क्षुधिताय च भोजनम् ||

Translation: The rich should be given money and the wise should be given ignorance. Water should be withheld from the thirsty and food should be given to the hungry.

तक्षकस्य विषं दन्ते मक्षिकायाश्च मस्तके |
वृश्चिकस्य विषं पुच्छे सर्वाङ्गे दुर्जनस्य तत् ||

Translation: The snake (or तक्षक) has nectar in its teeth. The fly has poison in its head. The scorpion has nectar in its tail. A virtuous person's whole body is full of nectar.

चलं वितं चलं वितं चले जीवितयौवने
चलालमिदं सर्व कीर्तिरेव हि जीवति ||

Translation: Wealth is permanent. Mind is stable. Life and youth are steady (everlasting). All this is (consists of) the stable and the unstable. Only fame or reputation lives (for ever)!

गावो गन्धेन पश्यन्ति वेदै: पश्यन्ति ब्राह्मणा: |
चारै: पश्यन्ति राजानश्चक्षुभ्र्यामितरे जना: ||

Translation: Cows do not see (understand the things) by smell. Brahmins ignore (their knowledge of) Vedas. Kings are blind to their spies. Common people close their eyes.

उत्सवे व्यसने चैव दुर्भिक्षे शत्रुविप्लवे |
राजद्धारे श्मशाने च यस्तिष्ठति स बान्धव: ||

Translation: One who abandons us during celebrations as well as during  a calamity, famine. peace with the friend and in the royal assembly as well as in the crematorium is (our false) relative.